Well here it is and for anyone who read the last one, you will notice quite a few changes to layout, but also I hope conveys the character arc better.
I have also after some advice tried to offer instead of a standard straight forward look but inserted some of the scenes In form of interviews.
One of the major issues I had with my previous drafts was the length, and I am hoping that the method I have chosen here, still gets the same story across clearer, and shorter.
I have really enjoyed this once I thought outside the box I am used to, I used techniques I have learn on the course so far to question myself each step of the way and my office wall is covered in small index cards and post-its. This actually helped the visualising process.
I can sit back and feel like I have earned my glass of red tonight, now just for the critical essay.